QW 11-1-11

I always have liked doing revisions...well at least more the actually writing the paper. I like it because I can just feel my grade rising. Anyway, I have consistently had issues with finding the right transitional word to use in my essay. It is nice that he gave a nice easy list for us to choose from. I think that transitional words are really what make or break a paper because without the "correct" word, you just can't get the same meaning across. Plus it adds nice variation to the piece. I am very glad that we are done with the book, because that means that I will get to read those extremely interesting essays on the proper way a frog will digest a fly which of course has the amazing language that makes me feel inferior to the writer!