Tuesday, Nov 1. Quickwrite

In chapter 5 of the Ballenger book, I learned about how to properly revise a draft. I learned not to become to attached to one aspect of my paper, as that prohibits me from properly revising my paper. I need to take a step back, and look at it as a reader would. I also learned that it is a good idea to have someone else read my paper, as they aren't attached to any of it, so they can better revise what I wrote. Finally, I learned that by looking at my thesis, and then reading my conclusion, and final paragraphs, I can see if I stay on topic, or if I deviate from the original intent of my paper.