- Dance. Everything looks like its getting put together nicely, it shows different types of dance. The audience is correct and makes sense towards her purpose. There should be some improvements towards transition.
Becca
- Journalism production. Everything seems to be correct as far as the audience and purpose. The transition was done really well.
John
- Literature. Everything was well put together. It completely draws the audience and the purpose is very clear.
Jessica
- Art. The purpose is clear, it caught the audiences attention. It was well transitioned with multiple songs correctly addressed to the different parts in the video.
Sam
- Guitar. Audience is to that of basically anyone who has heard and loved the beatles. The purpose is to show that people around the world have loved the song and re-created it to share with others.
EJ
- Undecided. It is a work in progress. Great purpose and audience so far.
Chris
- Soccer. Work on transitions, great purpose and audience.
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